1) Re-write Our Fallen Friend, in Part I - 'Ambriasa's Tales'. Style does not match that of the previous four stories.

2) Take current version of Our Fallen Friend and move it to Part III - 'Ombrial's Tale & What the Icarii Hath Seen', as the story will repeat, and change perspective. Will require extensive re-write in terms of expansion.
        a) Pay close attention to specific events mentioned in the
             original.
        b) Avoid the names 'Jute,' 'Wood and Line,' and 'Soap and Iron'
             used extensively in original - Revert to actual names.

Again, concentrate on specific events mentioned in the original as well as expansions noted below.
        a) Meeting in the wilderness
        b) Joining Ohmican's pogrom against Sun Priests, & beyond
        c) Refugees, and the Battle on the Quays
        d) Sea crossing & orsels
        e) At the isthmus of Giba
        f) Crossing inland sea
        g) Ital & the Anistariis
        h) Temple mount in the rain & 'a measure of honor'
        i) The Cormorie of Bana & the Anistarii horde
        j) Flight back to the sea
        k) Battle of the slew
        l) Our fallen friend
        m) ReCrossing & the stink of death
        n) Burial
        o) Remembrance Day
        p) Ostophestrue & Resurrection
        q) Beneath the light of a dying sun

Judging from outline, each segment should average 2800 words.

3) Take up once more the work of Part II - The Watcher's Tales'.
     Specifically...
             a) The Iyla's Flute, and
             b) The Onion Flower


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For those not familiar with this work, here're links to the first three stories of Part I...

The Cradle of Giants

The Wind and the Rain

Agates and Gold