there were trees
in the fields of my optimism
tall and lithe in summer rains
pliant in winter gales
year after years of solitude standing
Graceful and tall to reach the heavens
there were trees
then came the famine years, tinder dry
the clarion of lightnings, and fire
sweeping them all away, pyres
in the cold heat of spent passions
cooling embers dying in anguish
dying slowly upon cold hearths
like the fields of my optimism
lying still ~ empty in a place
where once grew trees
...gone now
where optimism has fled
i should now be
for there is no hope without her
it is not trees that so lithely stood
tall and gracious
no tree ever trembled pliant
in the arms of my winter gales
there were trees, yes
but never did they comfort more than she
the year after years of solitude
never did they help me reach heavenward
graceful and tall
there were trees
but none of them her
ELAshley
042609.045507.6
so falls a soft shower after months of drought...
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3 Comments:
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- Dan Trabue said...
April 27, 2009 at 9:35 AMNice imagery. A bit sad.- Eric said...
April 27, 2009 at 9:39 AMJust a man remembering the love he once had-- who allowed it to grow feral --and desires a return to what once was, and can be again.- KnotOnABlog said...
April 29, 2009 at 6:00 AMVery nice. Hauntingly wistful and beautifully melancholy.